Ali DiLaurentis
Thank you Max.
Max Previarty Krinston
*rubs his knuckles while Tallo holds his nose* no problem Ali
Belle French
*continues walking toward the edge of the forest*
Max Previarty Krinston
*follows Belle as does Sam and Tallo and Ali* sorry about getting blood in Storybrooke Belle
Belle French
I'm not worried about the blood. *concentrates on getting to the forest*
Max Previarty Krinston
*looks around as they pass everything* who else is here by the way
Sam Skinner
*looks at Belle* There should be Snow White as well as Prince Charming according to my mother
4 comments:
I will be honest its a lot shorter than your guys other chapters but still I guess I complain as it seems to me you both put a lot of time into your characters and the story. Keep it up
To be honest, when I went through it to make some spelling corrections, (Jacob), I was wondering why it was short myself. I don't post the story, my partner does. I just make spelling and punctuation corrections, but I will talk to him about the short chapter because it bothers me as well. Thank you for your feedback.
I will apologize for the short chapter and will be longer next time (or edit this chapter to change length) so sorry about the shorness of the chapter this time.
i will be honest here i do think this is a good length and good story chapter
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